Thursday, March 20, 2014

130. Where Is The Man That We Once Knew Comments

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Where is the man that we once knew
he was kind gentle and calm
the sun used to shine on him mostly
not much seemed to upset him
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Jaden Knight
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V P Mahur 28 March 2014

Dear John, Nice concept and lovely poem. The loss of human values is a great concern for all. thanks! Please reply.

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Roseann Shawiak 23 March 2014

Very well written poem, I can feel the sadness seeping from your words, wanting the man you once knew to return and never leave again. Are you talking about a loved one? Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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