130.Invisible Intentions Comments

I go hunting for the unknown Come finding the thrown That is open to the winds But close to my heart! ------------ great just great poetic lines.................10/10

nice visual extended metaphor: ''Come finding the thrown That is open to the winds But close to my heart'' wonderful poem...............10

profound...the inner journey...ethereal realms..unknown..well said

The process is never ending...the search is only true, the result has been unknown, what we are looking for and what we finally get? its like going in circles, yet grounded to where we are...bound by unseen shackles. interesting write! ! ! ! !

It is not that much easy, as you say, to find the unknown, though He is sitting in the very heart of one's self. It may even take several births of one to realize Him. This is one of the thought provoking poems indeed.