Sunday, February 15, 2009

13 (Might As Well Be A Friday) Comments

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Turning 12 is no party in the house
Turning 13 will be a sure louse
Turning 14 will be alot to handle
Turning 15 is no flame of the candle-
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Surelychoo Certain 17 February 2009

[: (dont worry... ur birthday will be fine. ill give u a present to cheer u up, kk? ] nice poem. good diction, well expressed.

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~ Jon London ~ 17 February 2009

Well constructed write, your words are soft in tone but strong in use...I like that quality.....keep expressing Best of Health & Happiness Jon

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