Thursday, September 3, 2015

13 + 1’s Maître D' Domicile Comments

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Mini bistro, in her wattle ‘n daub dwelling
Every morning, noon and late evening
Platters counted ‘n laid 1,2,3, ......13 + 1
with adjustments, as needed, in a routine
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Valsa George 23 September 2015

A great homage to a wonderful mother of 13! To have brought up 13 children is no small feat! Later she watched the fledglings leaving the nest one by one into wider skies! Once every New Year, most of those platters found a place on big table, occasionally though............. It must have been the happiest day in her life every year! A fantastic write! A 10

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Kelly Kurt 03 September 2015

A marvelous and touching poem, Jayatissa

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 03 September 2015

Thank you Kelly, for your comment

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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