Thursday, March 20, 2014

128. I Found The Best Part Of Me Comments

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I found the best part of me
all alone in the dark
half dead and barely conscious
shivering in an now disused playground
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Alesia Leach 02 October 2014

A beautiful poem and deeply moving. Thank you

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Nicole Pellerino 01 April 2014

Beautiful work. Keep writing. You have a talent

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Noreen Carden 27 March 2014

Great poem written from the heart well done

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Tanya Gupta 27 March 2014

very impressive! ... keep writing

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Renee Sinclair 24 March 2014

I loved this, and great job. keep writing!

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Roseann Shawiak 23 March 2014

Wonderful poem John. I love this poem, it gets close to your heart, saddens a bit, then brings happiness to light. RoseAnn

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Dave Walker 20 March 2014

A really fantastic poem, fantastic work.

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