Sunday, March 18, 2012

12 Lines Of Sorrow Comments

Rating: 4.7

The night air is cold
The world is dark
Once again you feel old
Listen! Can you hear it? Sweet song of a lark.
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Anne Harkonen
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oscar gilks 12 May 2023

heart breacking lines brought a tear to my ear

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oscar gilks 12 May 2023

nice write anna bought a tear too

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Richard Wlodarski 06 February 2018

A heart-wrenching poem. Excellent write. Anne, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 February 2018

The world is dark! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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James Mclain 05 February 2018

Anne, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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Lyn Paul 05 February 2018

Your words certainly capture sorrow and with a perfect title.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 February 2018

The poem ends with a sad note. It has caught the reality of a busy life. Congrats.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 February 2018

Anne, such a great poem... congrats for being chosen... a huge 10++++

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Tom Allport 05 February 2018

a sad poem of lost love and the feelings that this brings? ..............well written Anne

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Nudershada Cabanes 05 February 2018

Sorrowful lines indeed. Well penned. Congrats on your poem of the day.

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Subhasish Mazumder 11 August 2013

nice poem....... i will write this in my eng project....

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Dave Walker 18 March 2012

A really great poem, like it, a great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, As The Wind Blows.

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