Wednesday, December 2, 2009

11o3 Things Incorrigible Comments

Rating: 5.0

My first theme is my first love Mountains.
Incorrigible - ageless
The hights and sights of my chilldhood
Unsubtle the opposite of Plains
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Fay Slimm 03 December 2009

Loved the themed structure of this John (and like you I too admire Louis Macneice) - - - the reference to cats is amusing and informative to a doggie lover like me - - and the section on roses is filled with the fragrance and colour of summer - - - a delightful verse, thank you 10 from Fay.

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Robert Uy 02 December 2009

10/10.......................!

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