Saturday, March 15, 2014

119. A Foolish Girl Faked Her Own Life Comments

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she wanted to be so popular
her tiny mind ached for attention
she could not stand being left alone
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 23 January 2015

i assume the title stands in for the 'missing' first line of stanza one. interesting! a well-told story. foolish girl! ! ! poor thing. maybe she WILL survive and learn. i wonder if this is the person from your poem about grotesque face? i like the repeat of these lines: A foolish girl faked her own life she wanted to be so popular despite the pain she caused others and finally herself, remember she had a tiny mind. she undoubtedly deserves some of your pity, but stay clear of her for now! to MyPoemList it goes! bri :)

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