Saturday, March 15, 2014

117. When Their Love Was Young Comments

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a couple planted a special seed together
in the hope that it would grow
into something wonderful
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 15 October 2016

YIKES! ! ! ! it sounded familiar at first, but the later/latter? half sounded new to me. another fine sociology poem. favorite stanza: Now the tree lies in ruins even its roots are broken all the leaves have turned to ash such is their love now. bri :)

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 15 March 2014

Very engaging write and gripping narrative poem, a love story brilliantly expressed.

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