Saturday, November 28, 2009

1127 Cyber Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

This Poem is a classical PETRARCHAN SONNET with a Sicilian sestet (rhyming pattern c d c d c d) . The rhyming pattern of the octet is a b b a a b b a. Consequently there are 14 lines - each of which has exactly ten syllables (iambic pentameter) . The sestet comments on the octet. If these strict rules of Structure - metre - rhyming pattern and content are not followed its is NOT a Petrarchan Sonnet. If we use a Classical Form we must adhere to classical rules of Poetic Structure.

Once I perfection in a lover found
twas long ago and far away from here,
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Christine Schmidt 29 November 2009

I love how you mixed old form with knew era...cool idea and I loved the content!

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 28 November 2009

Excellent poem and the style so refreshing in the read.'Cyber Love'.Love goes where it goes and is absorbed by another or others...for each one own his/her love and shares it with he/she who's open to it.Too, it portable! lucky for the two CYBER LOVERS love travel through space. Good job...as usual. a 10+++

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Janell Cressman 28 November 2009

this is a cool write, love it! ! ! ! 10

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Patti Masterman 28 November 2009

What an interesting style. Good job..(smile)

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 28 November 2009

This poem is very well penned by you, John, a good side of writing to take the theme of cyber love, this is unique and great. I love reading it. And now I'm starting to think 'bout the cyber love.

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