Saturday, November 14, 2009

1114 Knight Errant Comments

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Tis but a simple kiss thought I
One kiss can do no harm tonight
She is a Maiden young and fair
And I a Knight in armour bright.
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Dialogue [but monologue with oneself] poem... Vibes are well caught ‘To him a kiss - but the whole World to me! ‘… Sure as Knight is ‘armour bright.’ Caught the kiss-chemistry of both …fine diction 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Ruth Walters 28 November 2009

Knights in shining armour, how wonderful. I always used to dream of Sir Lancelot as a child..... Ruthie

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 15 November 2009

Hi John. What a wonderful love poem vividly written by you. GOSH-I like each part of this poem. Your way in writing this poem is worth being awarded. KNIGHT ERRANT is a poem written for any ladies

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John Knight 14 November 2009

Hi All PH Ladies - This poem is dedicated to all ladies in search of a Knight in shining Armour!

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John Knight

John Knight

Liverpool - UK
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