Friday, November 13, 2009

1112 Rain - Again! A Pantoum Comments

Rating: 5.0

Horrible - It's raining once again today
Relentless and unstoppable the rain
Skies so heavy - leaden and so grey
Pouring down from roof and window pane.
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John Knight
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 09 December 2009

a rainy poem! ! ! I liked it! ! !

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Nikunj Sharma 07 December 2009

an absoulte rain soaked poem....I loved it...and the form is too good....

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Luwi Habte 20 November 2009

it is raining here too such a nice poem for a good weather well done at all nice poem papa ...ur daughter

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 15 November 2009

Horrible-it's raining. Wow, a well written poem. You described about the horrible you found in rain, things you got from rain. Yeah, this is nice. Horrible-it's raining again.

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Janell Cressman 14 November 2009

LOVE this POEM! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! amazing as always

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