Saturday, November 7, 2009

1108 Liverpool - Loop & Revil! Comments

Rating: 5.0

This a LOOP POEM. This structure demands that the LAST WORD
of a line - is used again as the FIRST WORD of the next line - Simple.
I am indebted to the Lady of OZ - Karin Anderson for introducing me to this very elegant poetical structure. If you try it let me know!
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Shekhar Joshi 11 December 2009

I always hoped to visit Liverpool someday(my fav football team) ....now after reading this, the urge for this dream has just increased.....nice poem and a nice structure.....liked it

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yellowbell alamanda 15 November 2009

liverpool...a very intersting piece. I learned new things; about another taste of poetry, lyrical tour on your art. Informative about those things that i reached only the shadows, since that I'am late comer, when it seems like that. I wish I could visit Uk and taste that scouse you've said. :) thanks you for inviting me to read you poem. i give 10 for this.

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Patti Masterman 08 November 2009

Very artful tour, thanks for the trip (and the ever helpful tips!) I am sure you would be the most competent (and consummate) host ever! (smile)

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Meggie Gultiano 07 November 2009

If you visit the UK - take time to include at least a two day stopover in Liverpool. You won't be dissapointed. They are The most friendly people in the World. You will get a chance not only to hear some Scouse but also to taste it! .................................................... I wish I have many financial blessings to be able to come to UK. I would love to...maybe I can only visit it in my dream (LOL) Thanks John for this wonderful journey in your Liverpool, this is an enjoyable piece to read today in spite of heavy downpour of rains here in our country. Back in my college days, we also have this, but we have to sing it.We call this, YOUR LAST WORD IS MINE, the last word of which we have to sing the first word of a song. Maybe I will try a piece like this..I love it.. Love♥ ♥ ♥ and hugs♥ ♥ ♥ , Meggie, your angel (LOL)

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Emu Getachew 07 November 2009

Loop poem interesting...i like how you maintained the last word. The piece is inviting to good times and great memories. i will try definitely try it.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 07 November 2009

Thanks for looping me around '1108 Liverpool'. The cultural journey was delightful-I love the Beatles.Thanks for the tour of the the art, music, with the most friendly people in the world-and John Knight is one of them. Thanks for your love and friendship.I love the style. I wish to visit liverpool one day. This great work of art gets a 10++++++>>>>>

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Fay Slimm 07 November 2009

My applause for this clever interchange of loop poem with news of your own city....excellent read - - and thanks for the invitation John - I may decide to take you up on it and visit one day.....10 + + + from Fay

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