Monday, March 26, 2007

110 % Comments

Rating: 4.9

Read careful gents
I am about to divulge a hidden secret
The secret list of what a lady finds appealing
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Patricia Gale
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Edward Kofi Louis 22 December 2015

Yes! Results may vary. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rachel Butler 06 November 2009

'The secret list of what a lady finds appealing' Rachel Ann Butler

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Simone Inez Harriman 18 October 2009

Well done Patricia. Much enjoyed.10 frm me.

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Marieta Maglas 25 June 2009

You are right, Patricia, but always saves us reason, love for Jesus, truth and acceptance of pain. Old women always cry with old tears.Excellent poem....10+++++

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Ivor Hogg 11 December 2008

Wise men know instinctively your closing lines say everything needful

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 September 2008

Wow Patricia, wonderful job is done! Very beautiful. Love it with my 10.

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James B. Earley 24 July 2008

No offence taken......this is very serious business. And by the way....did it hurt when YOU fell from heaven? Couldn't resist! Excellent composition.

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Rachel Z. 09 May 2008

I adore this and it's soooo true! ! ! Guys think we'll think it's attractive if they walk around trying to be cool, but we just want a nice guy! ! !

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Barry Van Allen 13 April 2008

Patricia, When I first read that you only had 10 ... tens, It seemed only right to make it eleven! B.V.A.

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Ivor Hogg 04 February 2008

No reason to take offence it took me years to learn what women liked I could have done with tuition when I was young ivor

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Men won't go wrong by following this advice. Whether they hit 110% or not. Fun, but of well-written fluff, glad I stopped by. Peace, L&T

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Nomi Mas 25 January 2008

sweet & educational on the surface. however, dont miss the depth of this poem, a person expressing her ideal, wishes, needs, the motivation beneath the surface of the poem. a nudge in the ribs to all us guys!

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John Maxwell 31 December 2007

Great write; 110% is not much to ask for. I respect your wish.

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David Harris 22 July 2007

Patricia, according to your reckoning my wife says I would get a big ZERO. I think after thirty four years she should know. Brilliant piece of counting. Top marks from me and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Paul Butters 12 May 2007

About thirty years too late for me but very wise patricia!

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Not a member No 4 02 May 2007

No, Patricia, I'm taking this very seriously. It all makes good sense to me: a whole bunch of reminders of where we constantly fall down - as if we're programmed for rejection. We could do with more of this kind of stuff - genuine insights into the female mind are kind of thin on the ground! So, yes, I really appreciated this well formulated recipe for success. Vol 2 eagerly awaited. xx jim

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Jim Foulk 20 April 2007

yes thank you patricia for reminding us, we do need to change our ways. this was a great write.

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Duncan Wyllie 30 March 2007

It may indeed be a little humour, but we all need a gentle reminder Thankyou Patricia Love duncan X

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Original Unknown Girl 30 March 2007

110% spot-on Patricia! Love this, have to agree with everything you say.... now then guys form an orderly queue and the scoring will commence! LOL! Thanks for this, a most uplifting read! HG: -) xx

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 28 March 2007

Results may vary... but your work is constant! Also... shake vigorously before using... that's gotta be worth something ;)

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