(110) Crisis Of A Child Comments

mine are in a chair into the screen they state enjoying sick warfare they say I'm not allowed to care unaware, they stare not share not fair just stare

Powerful poem my friend! As I read it I seen many people I know in that so many times this happens and will continue to happen because we are all so busy and preoccupied at times with things that don't matter...and the children are the ones who suffer.Melvina this is another well written piece with much insight into what many parents and just society should know...if we don't pay attention to the children of the world and teach them the way they should go...anything can happen. (TEN) Thanx for sharing, Take care of U, =Shelley=

Melvina, poignant, powerful and expresses only to well the nightmare parents have to face today. In our busy lifestyle we so often neglect the ones we shouldn't. Lovely poem and I hope a lot a people read it and get the strong message it delivers. Thanks for sharing it. David

POWERFUL WRITE, MY DEAR...WELL CRAFTED...WITH A CRITICAL MESSAGE OF REAL LIFE FAMILY CRISIS...SOLID WORK FJR

Good advise, Melvina and well composed. A very purposeful write! Brian