Saturday, March 15, 2014

110. Beating Up An Onion Comments

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Beating up an onion
on my way to mars
we saw a drunken lemon towel
playing drums with the stars
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Bri Edwards 21 March 2015

Profanisaurus, I like this more than one or two other ‘silly’ poems you’ve written/I’ve read. my favorite stanza: “The shark was chosen by the radio goats to lead an army of rakes in to battle with a football bully and his glass nosed snake” ………………………………. I believe there IS a snake named “glass snake”. poor onion! nice rhyming and a very nice sound/flow. have a craze as day! bri :)

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Brian Jani 03 July 2014

nice poem with some wild imagination.keep it up hey

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