Friday, April 11, 2008

11 The Shooting Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was looking the stars one night,
On a clear new moon night,
When suddenly I saw a shooting star
Coming nearer me
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Athul KrishnaA
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Young man, you have impressed me, greatly. There is much talent within you...and boudless potential awaiting to be tapped. Don't ever put that pen down....You have a very valuable gift....one that will stay with you, for your entire lifetime.One that will instill wisdom, foresight, image & discipline in whatever you decide to do. I wish i had started writing when i was your age.This is a fine piece of poetic work, Athul.Good Luck to you & i'll be watching out for your ultimate continued progress. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Chez Dalton 22 April 2008

lol awesome it's funny

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Athul KrishnaA

Athul KrishnaA

Kottayam, Kerala
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