Thursday, November 2, 2006

11 - The Road Comments

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I've been travelling down this road for years,
Along the way so many smiles, so many tears.
Don't know where it goes or where it ends,
Along the way I’ve left behind family and friends.
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nicola burkett
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~ Jon London ~ 25 May 2008

Hi Nicola, This piece is so warming..along distance traveled to find security..no better place than in your heart....Your struggle to reach there, tears of sorrow the pain of reaching your goal...lovely poem Thanks for sharing your lovely expression Best wishes Jon

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Ben Gieske 20 September 2007

Truly said and nice to have such a road. Tears and pain are many times worthwhile experiences along a road worth travelling. I can understand the unexpected twists and turns of such a road as yours. Hopefully, my road will lead home like yours.

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Duncan Wyllie 29 November 2006

As does this, the home being the heart, it can see past the pains and the toils of the moment, leading to pastures new, afresh, this is a beautiful and honest piece of poetry I enjoyed this very much Love duncan X

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