Wednesday, May 31, 2006

(11) Integrity Shall Make Me Immortal Comments

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I want to be the sun,
A sun that shall never fade.
And when the night turns on
Through the stars I shall be immortal made.
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Lubna S. Khan
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Arshaj Gaikwad 03 April 2009

hey, , , , this is an amazing poem... great feelin after i finished reading... and realy great title.... arsh

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Peter A. Crowther 17 September 2006

A praiseworthy ambition and very well expressed

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Aisha Sherazi 08 June 2006

This is just lovely Lubna. True humans want to live forever, your poem reminds us that doing good is the only way to do so. Peace, Aisha

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Lubna S. Khan

Lubna S. Khan

Dahanu, Maharashtra, India
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