River water
washes
everything
clean
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Reminds me of a song, "I've got a river of life flowing out of me! "
Hi, lovely poem. I enjoyed how you captured the power of nature to transform and cleanse through your descriptions of the river water.
I am greatly happy that you liked the poe. And grateful to you…
It is great if one acquires a self-cleansing mind. Nicely conceived and expressed
It is a matter of pride to read your comments on my poem
Nice contrast between river and time.....river cleans itself.. time solves others' difficulties....nice thought and write
Thank you. You are the first person to point out this feature. Nice
cleaning is the inborn character of water; nicely written the theme
Everyone, everything has its own characteristics and characters that are inborn, written in the genes
The healing powers of endless time are evident in this beauty of a poem.
Endless time reflecting in the endless flow of river waters… thank you Evelyn
The words here just flow, serving as a reminder that all can be made clean. This verse is a gem, Unnikrishnan.
Thank you, Mr Lemon. Your words make my day, dear friend and fellow-poet.
One feels that cleansing as the river waters flow, the magic of creativity in this soothing poem dilivers
Thank you, Sandra. Your words make my day, dear poet
"Bharati Nayak added this poem to her favourites ". Thank you, Bharati. Obliged
oh, I like what you did with this--the life rhythm between stanza 1 and 3---now that's a poet's hand at work---5 stars
Thank you Susie. I am so happy that you enjoyed the poem. Your support is always cherished.
Yes. True. A river does wash its self clean. So does truth in life.
Thank you. It is gratifying that you could connect with the poem
Thank you, Sylvia for your time and good words and the 5 *
FINALLY I have found this poem as you suggested through BECCA's response upon your CLEAN, Unnikrishnan
Thank you, Sylvia for your patience. Thank God, you could find a way out of the mess PoemHunter has created.
Depth lies in simplicity and brevity.... your poem proves that. A deep underlying meaning behind the economy of words. Bravo!
Thank you. I hold brevity as one of the most important qualities of Poetry. Though, I am not very adept in maintaining brevity in my poems. Thank you, Nosheen
Of course some may feel some of my poems are horrid, with which OF COURSE I would disagree! ! ! Ha ha ha. bri
Sometimes I read poem comments praising a poem and I CAN'T understand why the commenters feel the way they seem to feel about the poem(s) .
Beautifully penned. Great choice of words. A thought-provoking
Thank you Rajitha. For your time, reading the poem and sharing your thoughts