Friday, January 6, 2023

11 Clean Comments

Rating: 4.8

River water
washes
everything
clean
...
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Rajitha K.S. Ayyappan 08 November 2024

Beautifully penned. Great choice of words. A thought-provoking

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Thank you Rajitha. For your time, reading the poem and sharing your thoughts

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 March 2024

Totally bravo-worthy TFS

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Thank you, LeeAnn. For the love and affection

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Rob Lamberton 25 March 2024

Reminds me of a song, "I've got a river of life flowing out of me! "

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Wow, thank

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Meghan Fenwick-Boland 25 June 2023

Hi, lovely poem. I enjoyed how you captured the power of nature to transform and cleanse through your descriptions of the river water.

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I am greatly happy that you liked the poe. And grateful to you…

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Anjandev Roy 03 April 2023

Wisely penned.......thanks a lot......

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I am happy you enjoyed the poem. Thank you

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 13 March 2023

It is great if one acquires a self-cleansing mind. Nicely conceived and expressed

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It is a matter of pride to read your comments on my poem

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Indira Renganathan 12 March 2023

Nice contrast between river and time.....river cleans itself.. time solves others' difficulties....nice thought and write

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Thank you. You are the first person to point out this feature. Nice

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 07 March 2023

cleaning is the inborn character of water; nicely written the theme

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Everyone, everything has its own characteristics and characters that are inborn, written in the genes

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 01 March 2023

The healing powers of endless time are evident in this beauty of a poem.

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Endless time reflecting in the endless flow of river waters… thank you Evelyn

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M.J. Lemon 22 February 2023

The words here just flow, serving as a reminder that all can be made clean. This verse is a gem, Unnikrishnan.

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Thank you, Mr Lemon. Your words make my day, dear friend and fellow-poet.

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Sandra Feldman 20 February 2023

2 peace and pleasant feelings as it flows.

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Sandra Feldman 20 February 2023

One feels that cleansing as the river waters flow, the magic of creativity in this soothing poem dilivers

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Thank you, Sandra. Your words make my day, dear poet

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"Bharati Nayak added this poem to her favourites ". Thank you, Bharati. Obliged

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Susan Williams 18 February 2023

oh, I like what you did with this--the life rhythm between stanza 1 and 3---now that's a poet's hand at work---5 stars

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Thank you Susie. I am so happy that you enjoyed the poem. Your support is always cherished.

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And thank you for all those stars

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Jim McGill 26 January 2023

Yes. True. A river does wash its self clean. So does truth in life.

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Thank you. It is gratifying that you could connect with the poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 January 2023

Top Score and to My Favourites

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Thank you, Sylvia for your time and good words and the 5 *

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 January 2023

FINALLY I have found this poem as you suggested through BECCA's response upon your CLEAN, Unnikrishnan

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Thank you, Sylvia for your patience. Thank God, you could find a way out of the mess PoemHunter has created.

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Nosheen Irfan 22 January 2023

Depth lies in simplicity and brevity.... your poem proves that. A deep underlying meaning behind the economy of words. Bravo!

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Thank you. I hold brevity as one of the most important qualities of Poetry. Though, I am not very adept in maintaining brevity in my poems. Thank you, Nosheen

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Bri Edwards 16 January 2023

Of course some may feel some of my poems are horrid, with which OF COURSE I would disagree! ! ! Ha ha ha. bri

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Hahaha!

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If you feel so, Bri, you could be right! Hahaha

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Bri Edwards 16 January 2023

Sometimes I read poem comments praising a poem and I CAN'T understand why the commenters feel the way they seem to feel about the poem(s) .

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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