Wednesday, November 18, 2015

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You once filled my heart with a ray of light that I could not feel myself,
Now this ray is dim and my heart has left a dull beating
Slow beats, blood rushing to my head again and all I feel is nothing
I push the blade against the surface of my skin, to feel real—ruby pearls emerge
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Medusa Waves
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Shakil Ahmed 18 November 2015

the poem is a beautiful psychological portrayal of fading love, you have painted your passions very well in the poem, your are a great poet, there is no doubt about it, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments, thanks

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