Friday, November 9, 2007

11/09/2007 Forgive Your Self Comments

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I am no perfect person this is true,
What I’ve done is only known by a few,
My dirty little secrets not for public use,
All I can say is sorry I have no excuse.
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Coreena Dejesus
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Katie P 09 March 2008

great poem! ! i absolutely love it!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 09 March 2008

no one is perfect, great poem

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Miss tee 06 March 2008

good rhythm, and great ideas expressed - its a very nice mentality :)

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Jemarie Ragudo 10 November 2007

I like poems with values like this. And the rhyme is good. You're a promising poet.

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Justine Keaton 10 November 2007

Mistakes are life lessons and if we learn from them than they are no longer mistakes. Nice poem. ~Justine~

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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