104. Kim Comments

forgot. i like the title; very becoming. :) bri

heavy edited version? ! wow! it was kinder or crueler before? i want ALL the dirt, the gore, the hate, the filth, etc. which you can dish out in a poem. ok, tell me the truth! you really liked the gal/guy; right? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - favorite parts, particularly for getting your point across and for the great rhymes. : I think you’d do the whole world a gigantic favour when you slice your wrists with the sharpest razor ............ indicating sharpest razor is much nicer than just razor. and there you’d stay until you were rotten or all that you did has been forgotten...maybe and instead of or? :) for the invective involved, i send this to MyPoemList. and you have again inspired me, John aka Profanisaurus! =============================== Getting What One Deserves Put her/his arms in a sausage machine; he/she deserves it. He/she was mean. Roast him/her slowly over an open fire. Give us the revenge we deserve/desire! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - bri :) Wait a minute! What happened to Christian forgiveness! ? ? oh! STUFF IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !