Saturday, July 14, 2012

100s Of Years Comments

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Trees can live for hundreds of years,
They well know to live together!
They tuft to earth, as child's to mom,
Light, water, and air they do share!
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Neela Nath Das
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2022

They well know to live together...............they are not jealous of their brothers and sisters.

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Rebecca Lyle 31 March 2017

A very lovely write of nature, I really enjoyed it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 February 2016

Creation has its own secrets in life. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 19 December 2015

The poem deals with the subject of trees and their longevity as compared to their human counterparts. The imagery and the philosophy come to us with an emphatic impact. Thanks. The branches welcome, greet and laugh. Leaves dance with the beat of the air. They whisper, and send their message, Thru breeze, and soil, thru ether- If nature lives, then all can live...

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Mohammad Skati 10 May 2015

Deep-rooted poem. Every word says something lovely. It's all a pretty poem. Thanks.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

May true frienships still remain after 100 years

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Yash Shinde 04 April 2014

.truly we intelligent creatures have failed to preserve nature's sanctity.....a wonderful write again........

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Kanav Justa 05 February 2014

But, we, intelligent creatures, Can't keep this nature's sanctity, , , '' so true, , , ,

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Troy Ulysses Davis 29 July 2013

Excellent poem about trees. Enjoyed the narrative. Their longevity is baffling. They are doing something humanity hasn't quite managed to master yet.

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Walterrean Salley 09 July 2013

Hundreds, hundreds years they can live, In warm friendship, fraternity. But, we, intelligent creatures, Can't keep this nature's sanctity! A wonderful example beautifully written. We humans have soooo much to learn. Thank you.

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Heather Wilkins 06 July 2013

a good write on nature and keeping it alive. if nature lives-then all can live

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R.j. Wynn 03 June 2013

Wonderful thoughts and ideas.

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Wahab Abdul 30 November 2012

very good poem, i like it...

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Rigzin Namgyal 15 September 2012

..your poem gives a beautiful message..keep it up poet..

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Shihabudheen K J 19 July 2012

feels like the poet know the rhythm of the tree, its branches, twigs, roots and all.......a must read for nature lovers and a study material for kids.......

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 July 2012

Nature cares.Humans do not.It explains that living organisms who think themselves intelligent are actually not worth it at a metaphysical level.

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2012

Great remark on your 100th, and the meaning and value is even more....Using words to make our brain function and appreciating is the best way to create harmony and to appreciate life....Such a great job! _Unwritten Soul

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Mother Nature would oogle at these words, if she were a member....Nil, i'm likin' this fine..It moves like the breeze and its storyline and metaphoric play is simply simpatico! ~FjR~

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Valerie Dohren 14 July 2012

We can't live without our precious trees - great poem Nil.

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Kasia Fedyk 14 July 2012

It is beautiful Nila, I love the trees they hug me when I am sad and give me so much comfort, I feel as they speak to me through their movement and I sway with the branches. This poem is pure expression of love for Mother Earth and our precious nature. Sublime!

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