Trees can live for hundreds of years,
They well know to live together!
They tuft to earth, as child's to mom,
Light, water, and air they do share!
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Creation has its own secrets in life. Thanks for sharing.
The poem deals with the subject of trees and their longevity as compared to their human counterparts. The imagery and the philosophy come to us with an emphatic impact. Thanks. The branches welcome, greet and laugh. Leaves dance with the beat of the air. They whisper, and send their message, Thru breeze, and soil, thru ether- If nature lives, then all can live...
Deep-rooted poem. Every word says something lovely. It's all a pretty poem. Thanks.
.truly we intelligent creatures have failed to preserve nature's sanctity.....a wonderful write again........
But, we, intelligent creatures, Can't keep this nature's sanctity, , , '' so true, , , ,
Excellent poem about trees. Enjoyed the narrative. Their longevity is baffling. They are doing something humanity hasn't quite managed to master yet.
Hundreds, hundreds years they can live, In warm friendship, fraternity. But, we, intelligent creatures, Can't keep this nature's sanctity! A wonderful example beautifully written. We humans have soooo much to learn. Thank you.
a good write on nature and keeping it alive. if nature lives-then all can live
feels like the poet know the rhythm of the tree, its branches, twigs, roots and all.......a must read for nature lovers and a study material for kids.......
Nature cares.Humans do not.It explains that living organisms who think themselves intelligent are actually not worth it at a metaphysical level.
Great remark on your 100th, and the meaning and value is even more....Using words to make our brain function and appreciating is the best way to create harmony and to appreciate life....Such a great job! _Unwritten Soul
Mother Nature would oogle at these words, if she were a member....Nil, i'm likin' this fine..It moves like the breeze and its storyline and metaphoric play is simply simpatico! ~FjR~
It is beautiful Nila, I love the trees they hug me when I am sad and give me so much comfort, I feel as they speak to me through their movement and I sway with the branches. This poem is pure expression of love for Mother Earth and our precious nature. Sublime!
They well know to live together...............they are not jealous of their brothers and sisters.