Monday, December 14, 2009

1008 Love Across The Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0

From a distance
Two hearts can beat as one
From a distance
All the illusion's gone
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John Knight
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 16 December 2009

Distance…Persistance…Existance…Lovedance…Spacestance…Stellarstance… Happenchance…Circumfrance…Pleasance… Like circumambulance…in Love …Epitomemotion…Yeah emotion mustn’t to follow the dipstick rules of Grammar…frowning of eyebrow of puritan brewer … Excellent treat…enjoyed it’s into… Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Patti Masterman 14 December 2009

Like the different conceptions of distance and it's effects. A scientific styled poem with a viewpoint of love! Tres different and most appealing. (smile)

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Tsira Goge 14 December 2009

In an original way, beautifully, from poets is born new words, and this should be welcomed only, / on mine opinion, certainly./ 10... Tsira

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