Monday, September 12, 2016

1000 Pointless Wishes Comments

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I wish I could take back yesterday
And all those days before
Back when life felt more easier
I wish I could take back all that time
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Matthew Holloway
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Bharati Nayak 12 September 2016

1000 pointless wishes ! ! ! ! It is never pointless as you want to go back to find your true self.A child is born innocent.But gradually he is conditioned by different factors.He has to behave in certain way.He has to learn what his parents want him to learn.He is moulded by others.We are not what others see us.A seeker of truth aspires to find his own self.A beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Matthew Holloway 12 September 2016

Thank you, thank you i wrote this piece more as an emotion which feels like wishes are left unheard or too impossible to become true. i eagerly keep wishing however futile it feels. thank you again for your kind words

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