Sunday, December 7, 2008

1000 Emotions Comments

Rating: 3.2

GOD created 1000 emotions,
I feel each of them every day,
GOD hid them inside me,
And I show each of them every day.
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Amit Jaiswal
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Laurie Van Der Hart 12 July 2019

Being an emotional creature myself, I enjoyed your poem very much, Amit. The form of the poem and progression of thoughts is well done. I like the way you credit your emotions to the Creator, in whose image we were made.

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 January 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Amit Jaiswal. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 26 July 2017

Excellent articulation. Emotions enrich our life and depending upon the situation their expression makes our social and personal life worth it. Thanks. GOD created 1000 emotions, Few I play with and Few play with me, Few have no face at all

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Chitra - 15 December 2008

welcome to PH, and a 10+ for the very first poem. impressive and indelible

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Reshma Ramesh 15 December 2008

welcome to our PH..........emoticons coming ur way.............................

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Seema Chowdhury 14 December 2008

welcome to poemhunter. you composed beautiful poem i truly enjoyed. one that comes from the heart always touches the heart remember that. always write what you feel.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 December 2008

This is a very good poem Amit. There are some very good lines like 'my tears flood a desert' etc. and the idea is great about our anger distancing us from friends. The last two stanzas were really so good and gave a reasonable and decent ending to the poem. Good.

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Aiswarya. T.anish 14 December 2008

Good.., trust in God

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Indira Babbellapati 14 December 2008

basic emotions are few but thousand are the ways they get manifested...good read, amit!

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<font color =fusha>Amy 14 December 2008

i loved this 10 of course! I loved the repetition of 'God created 1000 emotions' great work thanks for sharing

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Seema Aarella 14 December 2008

The power of emotions, their dimensions and depths, very well expressed...its a bliss to go through emotions, to be carried away by their strong currents! ! ! a good one Amit! 10 for ur effort!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 December 2008

God created thousand emotions which have turbulent motions and carries me in fiery life's ocean. Good work.......

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Sumita Datta 14 December 2008

+10 from me... Amit... Awesome piece od work...

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Jhon Fernandis 14 December 2008

i will give 10/10+10 means i like this poem great thoughts i think 50% thought's are matched to my thoughts thanks for sharing have a nice day and god bless you

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Tia Maria 14 December 2008

Without sadness, we would not appreciate happiness etc etc.... Acknowledging our emotions & accepting that God gave them to us for many a reason is crucial in acceptance of self. And being reminded that you & many others share in the craziness of 1000 emotions a day has made me smile even more today : -) What a fantastic poem Amit - well done 10/10.

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Anjali Sinha 14 December 2008

God created soooooooo many emotions countless yes thank him for this nice one-- -10 regards anjali

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Mamta Agarwal 14 December 2008

Amit this is a wonderful poem- few i play with and few play with me; ; nice line. i agree with both purkey and Kesav- most of the time in life we have to find happiness within ourselves. lovely.10. Mamta

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*Trusting You* 13 December 2008

I don't feel 'one' of them today, where is the smile on my friends? I need to feel the bliss; I need to feel the pain, I need smiling friends to bring back my smile. its good wen friends are there to pick us up and make us smile again but there is also a time where we have to do that out selfs. good job. Becca

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Kesav Easwaran 12 December 2008

'...Few I play with and Few play with me, Few have no face at all...' good lines poetic...God has given us thousand odd emotions...we have to be choosy in showing them on the appropriate stage and time...better to hide them in all other times...good write...good content...10

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Pallvi Sharma 12 December 2008

good work guy.keep it up....

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