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I am less inclined to be critical as to wonder why you have contrasted so many intangibles. Intriguing - but not lost... Rgds, Ivan
I hate to be negatively critical, since I have some peculiar work myself, but there is a fine line between being artistically random and just stringing together words and when that line is crossed, you get vague paragraphs like lthis one. sorry.
creates a dream-like imagery...