100 million stars I would give to you
No matter what the cost
I'd hold them in my hands
Hold them out to you
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a lovely poem...this one's worth 100 million stars.. thanks for writing this.
Beautiful, heartfelt, romantic, and happy. These are the emotions I get from reading this. If only we could have a love that would stay with us 'one more day'. Thank you Fi for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara
OH this is just beautiful Fi. A very romantic piece from the heart. I love how you use the stars and the sun and moon to create a heart melting romantic atmosphere. Simply gorgeous. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara
Lovely, contains the vastness of the universe of the heart in one smallish poem. -chuck
Beautiful write..... What is time to man but just a moment For man is made of the star, no dust he ask for your beauty is truly special
Nobody does it better! As a man, you really could use this poem as an example of what you would do for your lady in order to keep her. You seem to be sharing some secrets and giving the fellas some advice at the same time. I love this poem! I wish I could have written it. (smile) On the serious side, I am just so greatful for your work and what you bring to this site. You show us all and many of your fans and supporters how a love poem should be written. My best to you always Fi! Always looking forward to read and digest your work. God bless J. L.
This flooded my heart and brought me to tears. I was caught up in your words naturally. Beautiful. I look forward to more. Peace.
Love is the center to our being and you have expressed it vividly...luvli +++10 regards uavanice1 PS and thanks
Really the love is priceless.............You can send this poem to those whom you love and he or she would be delighted............Indeed Good Write.............
Isn't this a wonderful poem? I read it several times because I enjoyed it so much. Chiffie
Although I have read this wonderful poem two or three times before, Fiona, I just noticed that I have never commented on it previously. I am mortified that I did not! It is such a lovely and exquisitely written and expressed poem and I can easily understand why it's one of your favorites, since it is a truly beautiful expression of love. In fact, the more I muse over your words and superb phrasing in this poem, the more I am impressed with your considerable poetic talent. Carl.
Inspirational and tender- How to give and show love, not just to sit back and take - who would not give another day?
Inspirational - How to give and show love, not just to sit back and take - who would not give another day?
Fiona.. he is a very lucky man to have such a passionate and sensitive one as you...lovely piece...Alf
An insightful depiction of the mighty feeling of love ❤ - a voyage of pure bliss, well articulated and nicely brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing.