10 Moons, 9 Months Comments

This is beautiful writing with great subject....what else should inspire but the miracle of creation and the love that starts it: -) I wrote one on Motherhood too [3

beautiful ink.full of love and emotion.loved it.

100 % enjoyable Very very well written. Touching, full of feeling Any child would like you as a mother Even the shape of the text looks like a pregnant belly Congrats

brilliant poetry madam.. well this is what motherhood is all about.. and mothers are the idols of love, care, compassion and many more virtues.. God bless you.. regards prashant

A goodd poem with substance of love...........

nice poem, well done thanks for sharing

hw the body whispers in lil throbs...a bond of body language between the two hearts within...

Beautiful sentiments which as a mere man I can only envy

An amazing poem....two passions in one poem.

Wow... What a beautiful bond of two souls in one body... You felt, lived and portrayed that special bond of a fetus and a mother in an exquisite way. Women will always remain superior to men, because she can be a mother; a man can not… Loved your simplicity and purity… Regards, Kamran

I love this poem Onelia, it is beautiful just because of the extreme feminine angle to it but also so very tender. I had to come back to re-read your wonderful work. The shape of the wording also lends itself to the subject - Bravo! HG: -) xx

I love short poems Yours is exceptionally good.I like the way you present your thoughts 10 and more. And thanks for your comments on mine too

Shape poetry is so much fun. I enjoyed this one. I’m sure you knew that two moons in one month is called a blue moon. I like your title although I would have titled it Blue Moon. Since I am the mother of twins, I first thought of the two hearts pulsing as, Aha, she has had twins. But no, I was wrong. A wonderful poem. Adeline

very good poem this...that is the treasure one woman - well why a woman alone? -a parent cherishes in the early days of marriage...wonderful presentation, ane...10

I liked this one for its conceptual brilliance... amazing from my heart I can sing those lines thank you for sharing this wonderful composition 10 moon,9months.... Rema

The words fail to express the joy of new creative process of of those nine months in the life of a woman. A divine experience that you have conveyed so poetically in so simple and a few words. An example of consumate poetry pouring out of your soul.

Beautiful and clever...it must be an amazing experience...Coach

What a beautiful poem. The sentiments expressed are so tender and mirror exactly how all women whilst pregnant must feel. (though not so many of them could express so eloquently) . I love the shape of the poem too, the growing womb as it expands. A beautiful and very cleverly constructed piece of poetry. HG: -) xx

Such a beautiful concept about conception and swaddled in such beautifull imagery. Carrying someone within you and literally close to your heart and the poem really brings home the truth and the reality of this. Absolutely beautiful. love it so much. love Dee Dee(that's Wright...right!)

Love the original way you have conveyed the concept of time passing - the dawning of a new life, the pulsating hearts and those qualities that reveal themselves. Love the shape of this poem too. Superb Onelia. justine.