10 Moons, 9 Months Poem by ONElia AVElar

10 Moons, 9 Months

Rating: 3.2


10 moons,
9 months,
with 2 hearts,
pulsing in my body.
You try to teach me now
love, tolerance, compassion...
My Darling, maybe it`s just time
to repeat my most exciting,
10 moons,9 months long,
thorough body-
language
lesson? ...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akram Awadat 14 April 2009

nice poem, well done thanks for sharing

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Indira Babbellapati 16 January 2009

hw the body whispers in lil throbs...a bond of body language between the two hearts within...

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Ivor Hogg 07 January 2009

Beautiful sentiments which as a mere man I can only envy

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 January 2009

An amazing poem....two passions in one poem.

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Dr Kamran Haider 20 October 2008

Wow... What a beautiful bond of two souls in one body... You felt, lived and portrayed that special bond of a fetus and a mother in an exquisite way. Women will always remain superior to men, because she can be a mother; a man can not… Loved your simplicity and purity… Regards, Kamran

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Ruby Honeytip 03 January 2013

This is beautiful writing with great subject....what else should inspire but the miracle of creation and the love that starts it: -) I wrote one on Motherhood too [3

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 June 2011

beautiful ink.full of love and emotion.loved it.

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Hans Vr 22 May 2010

100 % enjoyable Very very well written. Touching, full of feeling Any child would like you as a mother Even the shape of the text looks like a pregnant belly Congrats

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Prashant Shaurya 21 December 2009

brilliant poetry madam.. well this is what motherhood is all about.. and mothers are the idols of love, care, compassion and many more virtues.. God bless you.. regards prashant

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 May 2009

A goodd poem with substance of love...........

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