((10) Fly Comments

remarkable indeed! ......10+

beauttiful as expressed..kite is like a bird, it shows freedom..grace

The kite is indeed a symbol. Flying up bu staying grounded down. You feel the air and imagine but also you feel the ground and stay logic (as in my poem Sophia) . Thanks Luis Gil. I give it a 10. I really enjoyed it. So fresh, so cool, so free!

A moving composition with beautiful metaphors,10 for it.

I had no trouble with this one this time immediately understanding the significance of the greyhounds.

Excellent vision................good poem

Quite intriguing. I will have to think about this more. A very strong message not easily learned but vital to becoming and being human in the best meaning. Not surprizing then that you are flying kites in the cold of the winter.

The gray and white charm of a winter morning captured successfully in this windblown word painting. Lovely work, Luis. Warm regards, Sandra

not so many words but a lot of meaning...i like that the greyhounds are watching...a beautiful 'naked' poem I can see you there Very beautiful-Pia