10 - Caught In The Fire Comments

awesome...i like it. Gives me a feeling of sorrow, of regret of getting into the fire in the first place. i like the idea of agony of awareness. Makes perfect sense

A beautiful symbol of expression and beautiful the feelings expressed... Yes its agony of awareness........the touch of maturity or the rod of steel that survives the fire........to melt a little perhaps but not to loose shape

I am glad you comment on other's poem because that is the way I find good poems such as yours to read. The message here is not immediately evident to me and gives me much to think about which is what I like about what I consider good poetry.