Staring at that gold
seam up her ass,
stitched on that fathomless
blue that takes my eyes
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I don't know why women have so much trouble understanding men in the first place, because it is we who put those jeans on! Or maybe CCR expressed it in their song, 'I See The Pale Moon Rising! ' Loved this poem.
I have never yet been able to fathom how men think, or what, if it exists at all, is the male psyche...your poem gave me a personal insight into yours. Good poem. Thanks. I might try a new poem as to how men in blue jeans affect me!
I never will figure out how the male mind operates.............but I do like this attempt to put it into perspective - good job! Linda
Wow, thanks for the image! Loved the Columbus stanza. I think you've hit upon something - must be our exploratory nature. 10 from me. -chuck
Very tongue in cheek(s) . I liked this poem, and also the commnents about it.