$10 A Gallon? Comments

Cute! Where can I find a twig? All of mine have been repossessed for 'NON-PAYMENT'! ! : ( Bri

Congratulations. This poem ranks #05 in the Best Poems of Members.

Well written

Well executed poem Lawrence. Our bodies will return to the ground but our words will live on forever.

This is very interesting

really amazing poem

you are a topper went to mount Everest to search returned saw you at sea level in 2021 same as ME LOL PH

" ...To share with you their good attitude. IF they have some of 'that' left! ' " I feel the sentiment of that line so often so much.

Nicely done. Thanks for sharing

I thought the message was clear and poignant, I really like this poem.

Enjoyable. Thank you!

Good message...timely voicing of issues.

Lawrence, A haunting poem, long after you have gone through it. Calling back again and again. Ordinary words, but extraordinary poetry. It just as Rabindranath Tagore wrote: That words have meanings is just the difficulty. That is why the poet has to turn ans twist them in meter and verse, so that the meaning may be held some what in check and the feeling allowed a chance to express itself. Yes, Lawrence, you have achieved a free flow of feelings. Much above the meanings and words. That is what poetry really is. Excellent. Congrats. Keep writing.

You might gain some sympathy, From someone who recognizes you are in disguise. And they are in the mood, To share with you their good attitude. IF they have some of 'that' left! ' Truly, if they don't recognize, then nothing and if recognized, the good attitude should be left in them The poem brings out the fading goodness in man and conveys the great message Loved reading the poem and added to my poem list

Congratulation Lawrence.... very well written aspect....

What is the meaning of this? please do decode. All the same, Congrats

Congratulations Lawrence. as usual nice poem, though it has been selected as the POD a few times now..

a good write. We'll all be walking before this is over.

a good write. We'll all be walking before this is over.

a good write. We'll all be walking before this is over.