10.10 Comments

Cute children play hide and seek Sweaty farmers dig very deep holes Who’s wrong and who’s right? /Almighty is only right in assertionand rest is lft to us to waitn translate into action... we may be rigvht or wrong... lovely piece....10 read mine.... man proposed...... humblesubmission..prayer

I don't know.Niether do I know much about the pop group Deep Purple.I'll have to do a bit of research.

They're all right in their own way perhaps? Each of us with different agenda's. I love short meaningful poems, well done. Ruthy

Astounding imagery written.....nice deep thought provoking poem!

Search me....but I know that lotsa people have suffered trying to get at the answer. Cheers. Subroto

That was interesting! I shall return to read it again. I often find that thought-provoking poetry needs more than one reading.

A thought provoker. Great Job

Life's mystery unsolved always.... just like which came first 'the seed or the tree'.. :)

I guess that was how life could be so simple and efort free when we just enjoy it!

wow this amazing mr. shiddiqi a short poems but very magnificent

enigmatic in tone, well executed

You made saint cyosure happy A good poem.

oh it is great image the road, the children, the farms and everything i like it well done and good one

10 out of 10, I am stuned to silence as I read this, such crazy images and thoughts blended together to form a powerful idea (if I understood correctly) , I love it.

wow saint cyosure will be happy nice poem regards anjali

well thought and written, but i did not understand the name....great job

everything seems so hidden, , , , yt... a normal errand... a thoght provoking piece though

metaphor played in this poem is beyand my comprehension. the poem seem well thought and written

A bit enigmatic. But the dark imagery carries the poem. Kind regards, Sandra

10: 10 signifies what? The time you wrote this piece or any other? December is usually a very wet season and to say whos wrong or right.......let the climate do the works.