Saturday, November 26, 2016

(1) You Haven't Hurt Me Comments

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I've been in a positive frenzy
remembering your dark eyes
and your wet hair in the summer evening rain.
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Uriah Hamilton
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 November 2016

A creative poem of mixed feelings, but very appealing. I like the dramatic parts in it too. Kudos for the poetic mixture of freeverseandrhyme scheme. Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u will too my latest titled Ashura.

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