Thursday, October 23, 2008

.1. Verse. My Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

You shine in the darkness
I made you my wife
Now we glow together
Oh light of my life
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David Threadgold
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Bob Gibson 24 November 2008

Where would i be without your charms if i could not hold you in my arms when we're apart, i do want i can but honestly babe! i'm just half a man

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Marilyn Lott 06 November 2008

Short, sweet and romantic. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

aweeeeee that is so sweet.....well penned

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Tsira Goge 26 October 2008

Well...10... Tsira

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Jason Threadgold 26 October 2008

What can I say, the best couple ever.

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Bob Blackwell 25 October 2008

You must have had a very lucky torch. I like these short sharp verses of yours.

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