1. Two Red Candles Burning Through Night Comments

I agree with the previous comment. It's a very unique poem and I love your choice in words. It's a very sensual and beautiful poem. This is definitely going in my favorites... By the way, I see you also write haiku. I invite you to read some of mine. I hope you like them.

Very original and different thinking to comment on such a thing...Great imagery and beauty in your words! I love how it overlaaps with other feelings and thoughts as you consider and think about two red candles. A thought provoking piece that is well written and interesting......Great JOb John. =Shelley=

what a structure -i want to imitate one -beautiful