Monday, September 14, 2009

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Woo Who 26 January 2010

beutifully written man! really loved it! sweet and cute!

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Nihar ... 15 November 2009

It is so cute, it really is.................10/10

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Wow! I love it! I especially love the way you did the title! And I love the way you rhymed! And I love the ending! I guess all I can say is I love it!

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Patti Masterman 14 September 2009

Good one; so glad your creativity is at full tilt. (smile)

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Merna Ibrahim 14 September 2009

What a refreshing and soul soothing poem! ! ! 10++...Thanks for sharing.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 14 September 2009

lovely poem/ special too. creative as usual!

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Ruth Walters 14 September 2009

Are you in love Hazem? ; -) This poem certainly sounds as though you are and is so uplifting to read...really well done! Ruthy

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 14 September 2009

brilliant poem.....loved it much! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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