Monday, March 17, 2008

(1) The Last Days - The Garden Comments

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My disciples and I, tired and weak
Sit here alone, for them I weep
I asked them to pray to give me strength
For they do not know of all the great lengths
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Colin J... 27 July 2009

I was in that garden... I'm Absolutely Sure this is how HE felt... Beautiful... Colin J...

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Ron Flowers 21 September 2008

Lacey, I have just read all four of your 'The Last Days' poems. I am truly amazed that these poems came from a sixteen year old. They are beautifully written and so insigtful. You are very talented. These are your only poems that I've read, but I expect to read more. Just keep writing.

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