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Very wise Poet! ! TFS

Hehe, clever little ditty. Got my attention and held it for a bit.

... thanks darling dave, this one made me smile! x

Really sweet and very creative David.--Melvina--

hahahaha.....nice, little piece! Preets

cool poem short and sweet i started to sing to it he he.keep it up love to hear more as you are very good

An interesting interpretation and a very individual style, clocked up a ten for the style Love duncan X

I think one in three would be more appropriate myself David, but you see her your way and write her as such. Beautifully simple and straight to your hearts point. Smiling at you, Tai