Thursday, September 11, 2014

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To you,
Yes you, your limited self.
Arrogance fumes,
From my volatile yet dormant volcano.
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Hardik Vaidya
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Roseann Shawiak 24 January 2016

Wow! Fantastic and volatile anger coming from within this poem, you've portrayed the lack of another's poetical finesse with great accuracy! Totally love how you described your revenge outright, yet subtly silent! Great combination of hurt and anger, couldn't agree with you more, Hardik. Really love your poetry, it's outstanding in my humble opinion, I always love reading it! Don't let it get you down, you have great innate talent that's stands on it's own. Thank you as always for sharing your feelings and heart. RoseAnn

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Mahuva, Gujarat, India.
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