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Very good for a first poem.

it is nice to see what happens when words do collide :)

If this is the first, then I can't wait to read the rest. Beautiful work.

You write passionately of your first poem.....and.....interestingly.....of those....to follow!

wow! ! ! ! ! beautiful welcome to poemhunter.com a little bit of incoherentcy- scatterredness---disjointed-- yes but by the end of the poem u have regained that poetic rhythm nice write anand +10 regards anjali plzzz do read my Olive branch.

Poetry is the one and unique in the world of chaos that makes us calm and delightful. The last stanza is poetically enriched. Thanks. Tapas Baidya, Kolkata, West Bengal