1 Minute Comments

You're a talented writer Chyna, I'd suggest writing on the global spectrum, meaning life really throws topics at your feet. Also, if you take away the life that you are unable to create, I don't think God will be pleased and grant you a immortality... I just firmly believe it doesn't work like that. I say this because I've been there and had those feelings... I won't say more on the subject except that... Life offers possibilities and change... Death on the other hand is final. Be Well Young Star,

The premise of this poem is depressing since one so young would harbor such 'final' thoughts. However, the structure and content depicts a budding talent. I can not say I 'like' the poem because it goes against my 'idealistic', sarcastic, cynical nature. And one would have to be full of life to enjoy inflicting those moods upon the tolerance of others. Good job, Chyna.

liked it, clever idea in the layout, take it you are still with us smiffy

1 Minute is a powerful example for your first published poem. It suggests your next offering, given one can write and post poems on PH while in Heaven (- can't think why not, there are examples here which clearly originated in some members' private version of Heaven's antithesis, Hell) will be equally as powerful if not better! I will be looking forward to it. Rgds, Ivan

plzzzz leave comments this is my first published poem and ii wuld juss like to know someones opinion on it