Friday, October 3, 2008

! ! 1 Lone Void! ! ! Comments

Rating: 3.0

tears yet ruffle gleaning faster
in the reeks of lone void
may be returning bird redoubting
yet not baffled by the storm on nest
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Dr subhendu kar
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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 18 September 2009

‘…heart yet resonant by the mystery of love ‘ Nice line and silky finish. Ten+

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 October 2008

Splendid....good one again.I love your use of vocabulary

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Thad Wilk 04 October 2008

Lovely and sad poem 1 lone void, sadly the mystery of love - goes unanswered! *10*! Great read Dr. Kar! ! Friend Thad

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