Saturday, September 15, 2007

(1) Lightening Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pencilling its way
Across an indigo sky,
Spider web lacerations,
Paint the earth
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leonard daranjo
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Alison Cassidy 06 June 2009

Your words etch the image of your subject into the reader's mind and leave her thinking: 'I wish I'd said that'. Articulate, graceful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ivor Hogg 28 February 2008

Induced a strong visual of forked lightning displaying its power

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Indira Babbellapati 17 September 2007

i almost saw it...i mean the lightning painting the earth!

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marvellous play on worlds pencilling the very word of earthly man woman reproductivity and birth of a crying poem...10 on target leonard

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