Saturday, October 8, 2011

1 Haiku Comments

Rating: 4.8

fallen leaves rumbled
under the cart wheel, silent
alley to village.
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subodh pandey
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Chinedu Dike 08 February 2017

Beautiful train of thought nicely encapsulated and well brought forth. Thanks for sharing Subodh.

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Allemagne Roßmann 10 May 2013

natural realisation into brevity postulate

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Ency Bearis 24 June 2012

good haiku with vivid imagery

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Louis Cecile 01 June 2012

Good haiku style to paint a picture of a scene with such tranquility.

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Elena Sandu 16 February 2012

Thank you, I could feel the poem's richness, lovely write!

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Silverinna Annastasia 06 February 2012

I like it. Simple, yet, sweet.

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Wabi Sabi 21 January 2012

yes, indeed. you have sense of haiku, how did you learn it? i like it.

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Salema Khatun 18 December 2011

this is a very good haiku

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Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2011

Nice imagery in this haiku, Subodh...10

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