#1 (From, ‘what's Really Happening - In 54 Numbers’) Comments

emotions of distress expressed in nice way

a well written verse.

Your poem has given new meaning to me of the old cliche 'She is a dream.' Your double entendra of reflection in your opening line has me first guessing at her really being there and he seeing her in a mirror and not just in his minds eye. Your poem builds after that great start. I attempted a juvenile version of this theme of lingering rememberances in my poem 'Looking Back.' Your version is much more mature in so many ways.

Emotionally, excellent and wonderful.... sentiments I appreciate and can more than appreciate and relate to.........marci. :)

lovely poem...............