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This poem has deepness. The flavor of beauty is mingled with knowledge of expression. I appreciate the last two lines as more than simple words. 'belief slowly beatifies in streams of penitence love of innocence reels up in transcendence' The greatest sweetness of life is that which is eternal. The Lord Creator, who gave his son's life for our sake, honors belief with true repentance and innocence he does not despise. These words bring glory to him.

Beautiful poem, I very much enjoyed reading this.

The speaker seems to emphasise on the beauty of the sunlight across the sky. It is beautifully written.

I didn't understand it.The more so, the title.

WELL DONE.....beautiful :)

Wow...it's amazing how you can express your self so well. I myself would have just said something simple like the sky is blue and the stars are beautiful. But you are something else. Thank you for sharing :)

Poetry for the intellect in Miltonic style. It might be milieu for the intellect but the living reality for the realized who have tasted it but can't describe its taste. The poem attains superb poetic heights. Thank you very much foy sharing it. I really enjoyed its ambiance. CP

This is very good.: D I love the writing style.

The 'Milieu' you have approached transcends the simple mind of a common human being, dear Dr subhendu kar. Personally, I think it conveys a spiritual melody characterized by concerns about values like truth, trust, love, which I found delightful (but unable to put like you did...) Best regards, Maria

A very spiritual journey through an odesius'ian' transcendent observation that show's glimmers of hope for humankind. Natural progression to your style leave's any ego in the foreground and shows free style at its best....Cool write! ! Regards Andy(: :

Hi, I would have loved to place an impressive comment but truth be told i had to get a dictionary for this one...Keep writing though, for those who understand your work salute you, as long as you can touch just a single soul...than your work is truly amazing.I 'm a simple writer and those who can follow the concept of my work, i say let them follow...We can sing at the same time, but not talk at the same time.I suppose the same thing goes with poetry....keep writting...keep inspiring.

wonderful poem and impressive it. you turn to give my poem....

Just for the last line...10+++++++++

It's really different Shubhendu.... Very nice thought and well described... :)

From : Alakesh Kalita (India ;) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/20/2010 2: 38: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Through the filters of intellectuality you enter the heart, truly. Most people have a simpler heart that might deny to treasure such a complex nectar. But what a poet like you actually do is to expand the power of language to think with. That is how a poet like you contribute and that is truly valuable.There lies the point for the poet as to how he would define his technique and standpoint in connection to their intention, that is, how they would like to contribute. I feel you have chosen that correctly, on reading this poem 'eternity on milieu'. But some poets confuse, they connect the wrong technique with the wrong intention and come up with a blurred picture. A poet aspiring to be a poet of the mass (his standpoint would tell whether he aspires or not) must be careful with the voice and effects he produces and INTELLECTUAL modern poetry is as concious as to that limit, if it is not, it should be and that is when it by any means invites the intellectual filters.Most modern poetry apply to chords in the heart after just a little tinkering with brain tissues, that poetry touches almost before it is understood - that is a different thing altogether. I do not garner any criminal aspirations for belittling poets with my sly comments as some might think. I only comment (honestly) on what has the order and fluency to enter my little head nicely. But that does not refer to my not leaving a comment for you in the comment area of your poem page. This letter I hope you will take to be more than a comment. I wish to get a reply from you just to make myself sure that you have taken me in good faith. Thanking you for considering me to be worthy enough of rating such type of poetry as yours- Alakesh.

this is very unique work you have created here, I still don't get the most important part of the poem yet

From : Mary Spain (United Kingdom ;) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/19/2010 5: 26: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello Subhendu, thank you for drawing my attention to your new poem. Your work is so wonderfully visual. Colours, forms and patterns - all vividl, all evocative - capture the reader, together with the powerful use of language. Thank you for bringing life and colour into a grey day in London! Mary

Your words used is quite bizzare but sometimes turned out to be very complicated.

Same sort of play of words continues in this poem also as in other poems of yours! Truth, beauty and perfection are used to convey eternity on milieu! Change of stanza lines give added effect to your composition! Free flow of ideas will make readers browse with still more ease! Nice to read the strain you have taken to produce another poem of the same kind once again!

the glories of existence are related to soulful life, all glimmers of life are meant for endeavored cycles of the union of soul and body, who can deny the colour and lights of the eco system, .......you are able to visualise the occult beauties with great choice of words.......i like the contents of your post